Happy Holidays! As my gift to you, I have composed The Worst Christmas Story Ever, full of stupid plot points, embarrassing constructions, impossible dialog, tonal inconsistency, and implausible characters. Fortunately, it only takes a few minutes to read. Dig in!
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SANTApocalypse
Chapter 1 – The Beginning
Deep within the bowels of The Ice Caves of Crendor, that most secret of places hidden deep within the larger bowels of Mount Kringle (the mightiest volcano of the North Pole), Santa’s retinas accepted light reflected from the naughty-or-nice list (and its accompanying gradations of color and shade) with not inconsiderable trepidation and alarm.
He called out to Clorex the Elf. “Clorex! Appear before me as I speak.”
Clorex arrived at Santa’s side in due course, the green color of his elf costume uniting with the red color of Santa’s red suit to stir Christmas passion in all those who observed, had anyone been observing. Had the pair not been inside but, rather, outside, where the likelihood of being observed was greater, they would have appeared as living holiday vignette that belied the true tension of the situation.
“Yes, Santa,” Clorex chimed.
“Clorex,” Santa repeated with some loudness. “What’s all this about flesh-eating?”
“Santa, I beg your pardon sir, but what flesh-eating?” Clorex inquired with a questioning air.
Santa held aloft the list. “Clorex, the flesh-eating on this naughty list,” he edified.
Clorex’s elfin gaze fell upon the still-held page. His pupils dilated ever so slightly so as to permit more light to fall upon his retinas. Only then was he able to see the words by the firelight being cast from that which burned inside the kerosene lamp, largely being wick.
“Ah, that,” Clorex offered. “Yes. I remember now, Santa. There has been a zombie apocalypse. Those children have become zombies.”
Santa pondered upon this most grave of news scenarios with a face of woeful seriousness and far-off wondering. “Zombies. Zombies,” he uttered in a repetitious manner. “Yes, that is very naughty. Very naughty indeed! Why hath you not spoken of this before, Clorex, my trusty elf supervisor and confidante?”
Clorex looked away sheepishly, though with more sheepishness than can be anthropomorphized by such a small ungulate, thus rendering his look-away rather more bisonish. “You seemed busy with all the toy making, my lord, so-”
Santa cut him off, interrupting him. “By the gods, Clorex! What to do with all these toys I’ve made!”
Clorex piped up with, “There are two named on the nice list.”
“By the gods, Clorex. You’re right! I know what to do!”
With that, Mrs. Claus burst into the room. “Don’t Kris, don’t go! I beg you!” she pleaded, throwing her arms around the legendary present maker and sleigh flyer. Her copious bosom smashed against his muscular, well-oiled chest.
“I have to, Greta!”
“No!”
“Yes.”
“No!” She held aloft her hand. “I won’t let you.”
He held aloft the list in one hand and held aloft his sword in the other as he gripped her by the arms and pontificated. “Gwen, all my life I’ve been searching, always searching for a purpose in life, aimless and adrift and lost for a reason to go forth in life and choose my path. But now I know what I must do. Nay, what I was born to do. I must stop the zombies!”
Her warm, limpid eyes filled with tears. “I know. By the gods, I know!” She pressed her full, throbbing lips to his, kissing him. “Will you be back?” she said worriedly.
He broke away from the kiss. “You’ll have to find out.”
Chapter 2 – The Middle
Circling overhead, Santa saw the zombie horde surrounding the house. “Son of a bitch.”
“Sir,” said Rudolph. “I think I can set us down on that roof. It won’t be easy, but-“
“Do it, soldier!” Santa ordered.
With his steely glare, the young pilot aimed for the shingles.
“You’re coming in too hot!” screamed Cupid.
The sleigh’s runners bounced twice as the nine reindeer fought to keep from plummeting into the throng of flesh eaters below. Rudolph ordered a hard turn, sending the sleigh spinning toward the edge. The deer dug their hooves down and held fast.
Once still, Rudolph glanced back toward Cupid, his steely eyes in close-up. “You were saying?”
Chapter 3 – The End
“You mean all the kids are zombies but you two?” Santa said to Terry and Terry, the Johnson twins. Santa had climbed down the chimney and down to the main floor and found five survivors holed up in the boarded up house, six upstairs and six downstairs, though they were all in the basement.
Their neighbor, Ira Feinstein, stepped forward to communicate his thoughts verbally. “It’s very sad, but it is true, there once were many Johnsons and now there’s only two.”
“Bloody hell, man, what’s with the rhyming?” Santa interrogated.
Terry, a year older than the younger twin, verbalized, “Ever since Mr. Feinstein found out you’re real, he’s been rhyming. The doctors say there’s no cure.”
“With reindeer for fauna and holly for flora,” pronounced Mr. Feinstein, “I fear I no longer can use my menorah.”
“Bloody Hell, man!” Santa murmured. “Everything about me is borrowed from Norse pagan mythology. In other words, there’s room for everyone’s beliefs in this crazy world, as long as we can learn to tolerate our differences and welcome diversity!”
Sensing a story theme, rousing music welled around them. Feinstein smiled. “Damn it you’re right! I am going to fire up that menorah after all! And you, McGillicuddy, in the corner. I am going to celebrate Ramadan with you! And Mrs. Swanson, sitting at the kitchen table; I shall go to your Kwanza party! And Spagnetti, lying on the couch; I will cut off chicken heads and do a voodoo dance with you!”
Everyone smiled.
“Now,” Santa enunciated. “Let’s go kill some zombies! Right?”
Feinstein, McGillicuddy, Swanson, Spagnetti, and the Johnson twins said, in unison, “Right!”
They burst outside, swords held aloft, ready to do battle with the zombie hordes, when they were suddenly attacked by thousands of zombies. Elgard the Dwarf king fell to his knees, shouting, “Nooooooooooooooooooooo” in slow motion. When all hope was lost, Santa heard a familiar voice.
“Santa!”
The jolly, fat toy maker looked up to see his old friend Rudolph the Red Nosed Reindeer throwing down the sack of toys, which landed in the snow with a sack-thumping-on-the snowy-ground noise. Just as the zombies were .5 seconds away from biting them all, Rudolph dove across and tossed something to Santa. “Here!” he promised.
The activator button landed in Santa’s aloft hand. He knew just what to do: Press it.
The toy boxes burst open as the gifts inside transformed into robot warriors, who then cut down the zombies with their mighty swords of fire and laser guns, which they held aloft.
Everyone cheered. “Yay!”
“Not so fast,” said Satan as he leapt up and planted his feet on the ground, holding his pitchfork aloft. “Have you forgotten about me?”
Santa dropped his sword to his side, no longer holding it aloft. “Well, well, well. If it’s not my twin brother, Satan. I should have known you were behind this!”
Terry and Terry, the twins, said to each other and everyone else, with knowing smiles, “Twins? We know a little something about twins, don’t we?” Then they put on their magic rings, which, only when worn by twins, can create an evil-destroying shock wave that destroys all evil in the universe.
The ground split, Satan screaming loudly, and swallowed him back to Hell.
Santa ruminated, “Well kids, since you are the only survivors of the zombie apocalypse, I guess this robot army is yours.”
Simultaneously and in unison, both twins at the same time said, together, “Awesome!”
“Yes it is,” said a feminine voice. They all turned.
It was Mrs. Claus, smiling. Santa smiled too, and she ran into his arms, the top two buttons on her blouse popping off, unable to contain her ample bosom. The pair embraced, the rippling muscles of Santa’s arms glistening in the moonlight.
“I shall never leave you again, Glenda,” he proffered feelingly.
Everyone cheered. “Yay!” The snow began to fall and, together, they sang secular holiday music.
The End.
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Every single sentence in that tale had something horrid about it. I quite enjoyed being awful.
But wait, there’s even more content today:
A few weeks ago I posted a humorous lament about missing Darlene Love’s performance at BB King’s in NYC. Well, I managed to catch her show in Newark this Saturday night. It was an amazing performance that included perhaps the most incredible and emotional moment I’ve ever witnessed at a live music event. You can read the full story and review here. It’s roughly the same length as my lovely masterwork above.
Cheers!
December 24th, 2012 at 9:16 am
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December 24th, 2012 at 1:29 pm
“Gosh! That was fantastic!” EL intoned in a I-know-I’m not-supposed-to-like-this-story-but-I-sort-of-do kind of way.
(I blame the Christmas Eve booze)
December 24th, 2012 at 2:18 pm
Thus far, no one from Hollywood has inquired about film rights. I’m going to fire my agent! As soon as I get one.
December 24th, 2012 at 2:06 pm
Definitely one of the worst Christmas stories I have ever read. Nice job.
December 24th, 2012 at 2:20 pm
If only Family Guy hadn’t already depicted Santa being abducted by prehistoric flying reptiles…
Thanks for reading and commenting!
December 24th, 2012 at 6:10 pm
Very poetic. Very descriptive. Very good for a writer from New Jersey.
December 25th, 2012 at 1:45 am
Hey, watch it, pal. Kool and the Gang are from New Jersey. They taught us all how to celebrate and have a good time.
Come on!
December 25th, 2012 at 5:56 am
Well done, Eric! That was exceptionally bad – if you don’t mind me saying so!
I’d like to think I can (do?) write just as badly as that but I’d be struggling to make it as entertaining! I like the picture of Mrs Claus/Greta/Gwen/Gwen in Ch 3. 😉
December 25th, 2012 at 12:16 pm
Thanks! This is one time I don’t mind being told my writing is terrible. The story is a little short of dangling modifiers (those are hard to come up with on purpose), but otherwise I’m satisfied with the awfulness.
Plenty of holidays coming up if you want to take a stab at your own bad story. I’ll post a link here if you do.
December 25th, 2012 at 1:53 pm
I can’t understand what all the criticism is all about…that was really, really good. Now, where are my crayons…?
December 25th, 2012 at 2:07 pm
They transformed into zombie-killing robots.
December 25th, 2012 at 2:32 pm
“The horror…” he cried in horrified horror.
December 25th, 2012 at 10:45 pm
Even when you’re BAD . . . you’re GOOD. That’s why you’re on Santa’s NAUGHTY but NICE list. 😉
December 25th, 2012 at 10:45 pm
Ho! Ho! Ho!
December 26th, 2012 at 12:39 am
I have a dreadful feeling that today’s atrocious holiday story won’t be the last….
December 26th, 2012 at 9:00 pm
Unfortunately, I recognized some of the Nora Roberts book I’m reading in that story. Mrs. Clause was familiar, but the beginning of chapter 3–where it starts with dialogue, then backtracks to the action that proceeded it–is very Nora Roberts.
December 26th, 2012 at 10:51 pm
Yikes! It sounds like Nora needs an intervention!
Thanks for reading and commenting.
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December 27th, 2012 at 6:35 pm
Christmas celebrations have put me behind in my blog commenting…this is hilarious! I give you an A+ for being bad…so bad! Happy New Year!
December 28th, 2012 at 8:53 am
Thanks Jill. Happy New Year to you as well. Charles Dickens has the edge when it comes to best Christmas story ever written, so I thought I’d tackle the subject from the other side.
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January 9th, 2013 at 10:51 am
The title disallows criticism. Very clever. Here’s my favorite Christmas story:
http://shauncostello.wordpress.com/2010/10/14/209/
January 10th, 2013 at 11:51 am
Well done. I left a comment.
As for this one, I really was trying to write the worst Christmas story ever, though I suppose that feat must truly be accomplished organically.
December 20th, 2013 at 7:06 pm
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December 24th, 2013 at 3:28 am
Okay…. the way it was going i expected a naughty scene between the twins and Santa… assuming the twins were girls??? LOL… i thought so for some reason. thi forget what now..
December 24th, 2013 at 7:45 am
I think that version would have to be called “The creepiest and least appropriate Christmas story ever written.”
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December 24th, 2013 at 10:23 am
He he… my dirty mind… hik… u have to admit the pix were inappropriate